Sunday, July 7, 2013

Chapter Eighteen (No Surprises)

Previously, on "Heat":
Ch. 17 (You And I)
-Joseph decided to come home to be with Sarah.
-He filled her in about the new developments in the case
and his outing with the boys.
-Joseph sang "You And I" by Stevie Wonder to her as
they slow danced, bringing back warm memories of 
their wedding.
-Sarah learned that she was wrong about Lyn
after finding out what really happened between
her and Brad, as well as Luke's feelings for her.
-They reminisced about the early days in their
marriage when they struggled, knowing they got 
through it, and no matter what, they would be happy.
-Because they have each other.

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Location: Bridgeport Community Fire Department
Date: Monday, 11/7/2011
Time: 5:48 p.m.

After spending most of the afternoon at the burn site (the charred remains of Alexander's home), Joseph decides to head back to the fire station. As he steps out of his car, the raindrops pick up even more---landing on his face, arms and leaving cold splatters on his bare scalp. At the sound of thunder whipping from a distance, he picks up his stride towards the front entrance. In about an hour, the day shift will end, freeing half of his crew to go home.  Soon after, the night shift will take over until seven in the morning. 

There's still so much to do. Reports to finish up, a briefing to prepare for tomorrow's morning meeting, a crew to check in with before they leave and a license plate number to run in the system---if he can find it. If he's lucky, he may be able to come home before 11 tonight. If anything else comes up, he may have to stay over, like he usually does. Lately this arson case has plagued Joseph's mind, especially after meeting Alexander and finding out the deceased victim is his brother. Instead of leaving it in Marley's hands, he's been following leads on his own and outside the normal hours. 

His thoughts become interrupted at the sight of a black SUV in the parking lot, which appears to be a Tofunda Wagon. For a moment, he considers the possibility that this vehicle could be---no. It couldn't be. What would it be doing parked here at this hour? Joseph shakes off this crazy notion as he passes by the vehicle, but he catches something in his peripheral vision. Right there, on the right side of the rear bumper, is a white playboy bunny logo---and a license plate that says "Boss".

Instead of calling Marley to report the license plate number, Joseph decides to jump back in his car and wait discreetly, in case the driver shows up. Within minutes, the headlights of the black Tofunda shine brightly as it slowly pulls out between the green sedan and white truck.

Joseph decides to follow it.

"A heart that's full up
Like a landfill
A job that slowly kills you
Bruises that won't heal"

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Careful to leave at least one car in front of him, Joseph watches the black Tofunda pull up into a parking lot surrounded by an eight foot chain length fence. As he watches the doors open, he lowers his body into the seat, careful not to be seen parked right across the street. He can't make out the faces of what appear to be two men walking towards the back of a run-down warehouse. This baffles Joseph even more since the two cars parked in an otherwise empty parking lot---an SUV and a luxury sedan, both relatively new---don't exactly match the condemned look of the building. Either this place is a hideout for crackheads or a secret haven for drug dealers. That could be the most plausible explanation for the nice cars.

As Joseph sits in his car with the engine and headlights off---the rain beating on the windshield---a cold wave of dread travels up his neck as he ponders what he should do. He can leave it at this for now, call in the license plate numbers and go home. Or...he can actually identify the suspects tonight by inconspicuously following them inside and finding out who they're working with---and who they're working for. An apartment unit, an empty warehouse and a single family home---all destroyed intentionally. What's next? Will another person be homeless because of this? Or worse yet---another senseless death?

The thought of Luke, Nate or Jake dying because of this pushes Joseph over the edge in fear---and fury. If this is what it takes to protect his crew, then so be it. Taking a deep breath, he takes the keys out of the ignition and opens the car door.

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Location: East Tradewinds Shipping Co.
Time: 7:55 p.m.

A few yards from the gate on the other side of the parking lot, Joseph finds a rusted steel double door nestled between wooden crates piles on top of each other. The crates, which  have been exposed to the elements for a while, have taken on a dull, gray color. He carefully presses his ear against the door to see if anyone is behind it, only to be met with silence. They must be in another room. With his pulse quickening, Joseph twists one of the knobs, yielding easily to his surprise. They left it open. 

Scanning the area one more time to make sure there's no one else present, Joseph quietly slips inside, knowing he's entering unchartered territory as a fireman and as a captain. This is something that the police should be doing, but at this point, they don't have enough evidence to be granted a search warrant. It could take months before law enforcement are in jurisdiction to get involved, and if they do (during an arson investigation), they may take over the case, especially when there's homicide involved. All of the evidence and witnesses could be turned over to authorities, and that may leave Joseph and Marley with nothing to work with.

As Joseph carefully closes the door behind him, he finds himself standing in a large room teeming of crates. Rows of them, lined up endlessly for at least 50 by 50 feet. The ones near the door are just as old and faded as the ones outside. The ones in the middle of the room, however, appear new with straw colored pine wood. Whoever these belong to, it's clear that they are hiding it in the run-down warehouse, and it's something valuable. After thoroughly scanning the dusty brick walls and taking in the damp smell, Joseph's eyes stumble on another steel double door flanked by stacks of crates. As he approaches, the voices become more distinct.

"---don't even know where he is."

 This voice. It sounds familiar to Joseph, and he knows he's heard it before. 

"You have three days to get rid of Alexander." The man behind the desk orders coldly, his eyes shifting back and forth between his subordinates. "Or I get rid of both of you."

"Yes, sir." 

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One glimpse of this man's face and Joseph feels like he's just been whacked on the back with a heavy snow shovel, leaving him frozen and fighting for oxygen. It's not possible. It just can't be. Something is telling him to get out now, while he can, but Joseph can't shake off this nagging need to confront them. 

Without thought, he bursts through the double door and cries out, "How could you??" Stunned, everyone jumps out of their chairs in a flash, eyeing Joseph like an unwelcome intruder. He's not supposed to be here. He's not supposed to see this not-so-condemned set-up of shiny marble floors, leather chairs and mahogany desk. He's not supposed to know about the big screen t.v. accompanied by the leather sofa or the high-end computers lined up against the brick wall. And he's certainly not supposed to know about the mini-kitchen area boasting a stainless steel fridge, stainless steel sink, microwave and bar adorned with expensive wines and liquors.

"Joe, what are you---" The man in the gray button-up shirt turns around, his eyes wide and  drenched in panic. 

"Mr. Rossi. So we meet." The man in the black blazer smiles, not at all rattled by Joseph's presence.

"Bring down the 
Government
They don't
They don't speak for us
I'll take a quiet life
A handshake of 
Carbon monoxide"

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"This whole time. This whole---" Joseph can't even look at this man in the eye, the man he thought he knew and trusted. Now they're planning on doing something to Alexander, the only witness he and Marley has. Something reminds Joseph that he still has time to walk away, that he's in over his head and if he doesn't do it now, it might be too late. It's a nauseous feeling to the pit of his stomach that he can't shake, no matter how much he tries to brush it off. But he wants answers. Now that he's been betrayed. Now that he has seen the eyes of the man that's responsible for all this.

"You shouldn't have come here. You should have left things alone." The man in the black blazer interrupts, shaking his head, looking at Joseph with pity. "Now you know too much."

"You will not get away with this."

"I'm afraid you're mistaken," He turns to the man in the gray button-up shirt. "Finish him."

"You're better than this, Jim. I know you." Joseph pleads, holding his hands up, stricken in horror as his eyes meet the barrel of a .45 caliber pistol. "Don't do it, please!"

"I'm sorry, Joe. I'm so sorry." 

CRACK.

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"This is my final fit
My final bellyache
With no alarms
And no surprises"

*Copyright 2013 Lyn C.S.*
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Author's Note: Ugh, this chapter just broke my heart. I almost didn't want to go through with it but I had to remind myself why it was necessary. And you guys will find out soon enough. R.I.P Joseph :( You will be deeply missed.

Ch. 45 (I'll Stand By You) Ch. 46 (Love Won't Let Me Wait) and Ch. 47 (You And I) from Memoirs Of A City Girl covers Lyn being there for Luke in Bridgeport.

"No Surprises" by Radiohead
Video by: parlophone

15 comments:

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    1. Ok now that I've gotten over the shock (not really you need to be online so I can yell at you properly!!!) I can try to leave a better comment.

      Sigh the whole time I was reading this I was yelling at Joe to just go inside. To call it in and just go inside. :( He is not an investigator and he should not have gone there but I do understand why he did. These arsons were getting more and more dangerous and he wanted to have the real evidence he needed to stop them.

      But sadness Marley really and he's the one that pulled the trigger. He has sons and a wife and he knows them all and he killed him. Just killed him. :( I am so upset by this turn of events. Joe really was the anchor of his family and I swear if Marley tries to set it up like Joe was somehow the bad guy in this I'm gonna be super UBER pissed. He can't sully the man's name on top of everything else. That would be too much of a heart breaker Lyn!!!! Please oh Please don't let that be your plot line.

      Man this is going to hit the family hard so very hard and Luke especially coming home after what Lyn has just put him through to find out his father has been murdered.

      This was not what I expected to happen and I am so very sad right now. :(

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    2. LOL @ the "yell at you properly". Ugh, I dreaded writing this chapter. I knew it was gonna happen, but I just didn't want it to happen. I'd work on the chapter, stop, come back, stop again and put it off. And when it was time to post, I must have stared at that "Publish" button for a while, knowing once I published, Joseph is really gone. And he is :(

      I agree, he was in over his head with this case and he should have called it a day. He'd probably still be alive. At the same time, he didn't expect to find the suspects so soon and he had to act quickly.

      I won't reveal who shot Joseph just yet, so I'll let people form their own conclusions. What made you think it's Marley? If it was Marley, that would be a huge betrayal. If he is capable of this, there's no telling what he'd do next. Let's hope he won't put it all on Joseph. That would be like kicking his dead body. I can't make any promises Mica, but we'll just have to see where this goes.

      Ugh...I can't even think about how this will affect the family and the fire department, especially Luke.

      Sorry to make you sad, Mica. HUGS!

      Thanks for your feedback :)

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    3. In my sad confusion I read Marley's name and I think the rest was a blur. Karri pointed out to me that he called out Jim so guess it's not Marley so that is good. But still sad. It is someone from the department I think though.

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    4. No worries, Mica. You were just in shock. This was a very difficult chapter for me to write, so I know it was difficult for you to read.

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  2. HOLY. SHIT.

    I think I told you that I had a feeling Joe was going to die, but I didn't think it would be like this. I thought he'd die in one of the deliberately set fires. Damn. Well, now the previous chapter makes a lot more sense in this context.

    So I'm guessing Jim is James Ambrosia, the firefighter? Good God. A little hard up for cash, I presume? Insane.

    This is going to be absolutely heartbreaking for Joe's family and the family at the fire department. And Luke, driving home from getting kicked in the teeth by Lyn, only to walk into this...*whimpers*

    From a storytelling perspective, I totally get why this was done. It gives you so much material. But emotionally of course, it hits me right in the feels. It's like when Ned Stark got his head chopped off. Another case of the Man That Was Too Noble To Live.

    Fantastic work.

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    1. YES, I remember when you told me that and I was like, whoa!! She's on to something! It would make sense for him to die from arson, but he ventured into dangerous territory with Laslo. He should have called it in and watch for new developments, but he just had to confront them without any backup. Big mistake on his part.

      So you think it's James Ambrosia? Hmmm...interesting. I can't confirm just yet but that's an interesting theory and good observation based on "Jim". That would be the ultimate betrayal---another firefighter. Stay tuned!

      Yes, this will absolutely devastate his wife and sons, especially Luke, as well as the fire department. He's the glue that held it all together, and now that he's gone, there's no telling how people will cope with this.

      You will see why when the next chapters are unraveled. And like you said, it opens up new possibilities. Still, it's still heartbreaking :( Ahh, Ned Stark from Game of Thrones! Yes, Joseph was definitely too noble to live.

      Thank for the kind words and feedback, Karri!

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  3. Oh my gosh Lyn that was the fastest chapter I ever read and Joseph getting shot that is so sad. Any how I just wanted to say thanks for telling me about update. I really like your stories alot. I still think you should be violent story writer I think you would do quite well in that genre. anyway take care and stay cool.

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    1. I'm glad you enjoyed that chapter! LOL the fastest you ever read huh? I'll take that as a compliment since my updates have been rather lengthy lately. Hmmm...violent story writer. I have been getting some practice with Memoirs and Heat, so we'll see.

      Thanks for your feedback, Tom!

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  4. :O poor Joe! I had a feeling this chapter wasn't going to end well but I never thought Joe would get shot. I go goosebumps and I can't believe he's been killed, I feel so sad:(

    I'm so sorry I haven't been around and commented on your new chapters yet, everything seems to have been happening at the same time and I've had no time to do anything! I hope you're well and I'll be catching up on your new chapters now!

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  5. Hi Clairey, welcome back! It's great to see you again. I know, this chapter broke my heart :( Joe should have called it a day and not acted too quickly. He and Marley would have been able to identify the owner of the car and gotten more information about the suspects from a distance.

    Now he's dead, leaving a devastated family behind. Now only do they have to appoint a new fire captain but they will also have to prove that Joe didn't commit suicide.

    No worries, I figured RL has been busy for you. Just glad to see you back, I missed you! :)

    Thanks for your feedback!

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  6. I was really worried there that it was Marley. So tragic :(
    Joseph's family will be devastated.

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  7. I know, this chapter just broke my heart :( It wasn't Marley but it's someone Joseph knows. You will see how the family deals with this in the next two chapters.

    Thanks for your feedback, Zhippidy :)

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  8. All caught up now! I already knew from Memoirs that this was going to happen, so it didn't really caught me of guard, and yet... to ACTUALLY watch Joseph get killed in such a way... So tragic! :-(

    And on a side note, the pics for this chapter (I was going to say "shots", but I think I'll stick to "pics" LOL) were perfect. They fit the tension of the whole scene just fine!

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    1. Yay for getting caught up! This chapter was just as difficult for me to write. Luke is devastated, and I haven't even covered how the rest of the family is dealing with this.

      I'm glad you liked the pics. The last one breaks my heart every time I see it :(

      Thanks for the kind words and feedback, Marsar :)

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