Saturday, February 11, 2012

Chapter Five (Turn Me On)

Previously, on "Heat":
Ch. 4 (Through The Years)
-Nate and Jake went over to Joseph and Sarah's house for dinner.
-During the game, the boys bickered back and forth after Nate's "Chilly Willy" comment.
-Joseph threatened to give them a "litty chilly willy" reputation at work if they didn't act nice.  Apparently, it worked.
-Jake helped Sarah with dinner by making salad.
-To Joseph and Sarah's surprise, Lyn turned out to be Brad's ex.
-Sarah did not like the idea of Luke getting involved with someone associated with Brad.
-After the boys left, Joseph warned his wife that he was going to "spank that ass".

*Strong language*

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Location: 4400 Hamming Pier Road
Date: Sunday, 10/30/11
Time: 9:49 p.m.

"It's about time." Nate breathes a sigh of relief as he opens the door.

"Sorry I'm late.  I got caught up." Landon shrugs, barely able to look his best friend in the eye.  But they didn't always get along.  They both played baseball in high school, but for different teams, who happened to be the city's largest rivals: Public School 67 Warriors  (Nate's school) and Bridgeport High Pirates (Landon's school).  Even though Nate led his school in hits, Landon held the district record with 15 or less hits allowed every season.  In their junior year, they went head-to-head in the district championships.  Landon knew he was good, and he was very cocky.  He was convinced that he would throw a no-hitter against Nate's team, with state already on his mind.  To his surprise, not only did Nate hit three home runs that night, he also led his team to the state championships.  Even though the Warriors lost, Nate finally earned Landon's respect as an athlete.

"Yeah, you got caught in someone's skirt, huh?" Rolling his eyes, Nate lets Landon inside the apartment.

"Dude, it was Lisa's fault.  She needed some Big Daddy." He grins mischievously, pointing to himself.  

"What's that smell??" Nate starts sniffing his brown-eyed friend's cotton sweatshirt.

"What?  I just took a shower!" He looks down, then starts inhaling his armpits. "And I put deodorant."

"No...it's something else..." 

"Whaaat?" 

"I smell..." Nate pauses, then looks at him straight in the eyes. "A whore!!"

"Call me what you want. I just got laid."

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"Come on, J.C., just do a kneel down.  I'm already whoopin' your ass by 21 points!" Jake elbows his best friend, who shares the apartment with him and Nate.  They have known each other since first grade.  Jake can still remember the first day he met Johnny Clemens, as known as J.C.  He was practicing with his soccer ball outside when a moving truck pulled up to the house next door.  Out came a quiet, scrawny kid in a torn hooded sweatshirt and faded jeans.  Before he even had a chance to say hello, he overheard his older brother Brad say, "Let's put the stuff inside before Dad throws a fit."  

The next day, the teacher introduced J.C. as the new student in Jake's class, but nobody wanted to play with him during recess.  He just sat under a tree near the swings, watching everyone else run around and scream in delight.  Jake felt bad for this new kid, so he went over to talk to him.  He ignored the strange stench coming from his wrinkled clothes, as well as his troubling inability to make eye contact.  During lunch, Jake found him sitting alone, so he decided to to join him, despite the other students' protest.  With his feather-blonde hair, sparkling hazel eyes and killer smile, he had no problems making friends...and charming the female teachers.  To Jake's dismay, Sarah accidentally gave him Luke's lunch: a tuna melt.  He hates tuna, and just a mere whiff of the fishy smell made him queazy.  Seeing this, J.C. offered his peanut butter and jelly sandwich.  They have been best friends since.

"Hell no, bro! I still got three minutes." J.C. elbows him back as he forces a fumble, bringing his team close to the 20 yard line.

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"What's up, Landon!" Jake briefly looks up as his brother's best friend sits next to him.

"What took you so long?" J.C. asks, never wavering his gaze from the t.v.

"You know...Lisa." 

"Are you sure she's not your girlfriend? She's been holding you up lately." Jake playfully shoves him.  

"Naw, dude.  There's too many flavors at Baskin Robbins." 

"Yeah, and he just had a scoop tonight." Nate chuckles.

"Daaaaaamn!!" Jake and J.C. both sit back in awe, looking at Mr. Big Daddy.

"We need to get going.  Who's driving?" Nate walks over to the game console to turn it off.

"I can drive." Landon announces.  "It's the least I can do."

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"So where are we going?" Landon slows down as a four way stop approaches.  

"In Somniac.  We're meeting Jessica and her friends." Nate straightens out his hat, feeling anxious just thinking about her.  Even though they haven't spoken in over three months since the break-up, she called him up a few days ago to see if he wanted to get together.  Nate made it clear from the beginning that he just wanted to have fun, but with the hot sex they were having, things became a little more complicated.  Feelings got involved.  Expectations arose.  The next thing he knew, he found himself a girlfriend who wanted to meet his family.  The problem was, she wasn't exactly the type of girl he planned on bringing home to mom.  And sure enough, Sarah didn't like her, no matter how polite she was.  There was a subtle icyness in Sarah's tone as she shook this girl's hand.  Nate regretted bringing her home...but not as much as his mother's disapproval.

"You're back together?" Jake turns around, looking at his brother suspiciously.

"No.  Just hanging out." 

"That's how it starts.  You already broke up like a dozen times." Landon looks over at him from the rear-view mirror.

"I don't know, man.  It's just...something about her."  Nate's legs start to fidget as he looks out the window.

"I don't blame you.  She's hot." J.C., who is sitting next to him, shakes his head in a daze. "Mm, mm, mm.  She looks like she'll fu---"

"Heyyyy! That's my ex you're talking about." 

"Sorry, dude.  Just sayin'."

"I hope her friends are hot." Landon chimes in as he makes a right turn.

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Location: Insomniac

Time: 10:27 p.m.

As Nate enters the dance floor, he can already feel the bass from the music vibrating under his shoes. Yeah, it's on tonight! The contrast of the neon lights from the gobo wildly caressing the floor in the dark, along with the damp smell of sweat and liquor in the air, pumps him up even more.  He needed this.  After a grueling first week at the firestation, he needed to release some of the tension from his body and mind.  

He searches for Jessica, but he can't find her.  He does, however, see a few cute girls dancing, but their backs are turned. He starts to wonder if those are her friends.

"Is she here?" Landon asks as he scans the room for a familiar face.

"I don't see her." Just the thought of seeing his ex again causes a tightness in his chest.  He's been thinking about her lately, wondering what he'd do when he sees her again.  Will the feelings return? Or will he realize that the only thing they have in common is sex?

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A girl with short, platinum blonde hair and pale hazel-green eyes stops dead in her tracks as soon as she sees Nate.  She's mesmerized by the way he moves his body to the music.  A soft smile escapes her lips as she imagines herself grinding on him, teasing him.  His hands would travel up and down her back as their heavy breathing start to drown out the music.  The only thing they will know is the impatient need to free themselves from the constraint of their clothes.  The only thing they will want is the urgent desire to feel and taste each other's skin.


"My body needs a hero
Come and save me
Something tells me 

You know how to save me
I've been feeling weird 
Oh, I need you to come 

And rescue me"

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"Nathan." The sound of his name escapes her tongue like a bubble being blown into the breeze.  

"Hey, Jessica..." His pulse jumps at the sight of her standing in front of him.  From her short, body-hugging dress to the way her high heels accentuate her long, shapely legs,  he can't think straight.  Hazy flashbacks of their naked, sweaty bodies tangled up for hours invade his thoughts as he tries to remember why they broke up in the first place.  Fuck, she looks hot.  

"How've you been?" Her eyes burn through him as she slowly scans him from head to toe.  

"I've been good.  What about you?" 

"Can't complain."

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"So did your friends make it?" Nate asks as his body moves with hers.  He doesn't want to get ahead of himself, so he keeps a certain distance, despite what her eyes are suggesting,

"Yeah, they're around here somewhere.  Did yours?" She flashes him a warm smile as she looks around.

"Yeah, except for Luke.  He's out of town." 

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"I almost didn't recognize you! You used to be blonde!" J.C.'s jaw drop at the sight of Brooke with black hair.  
He met her two years ago at Brad and Lyn's party, when they just moved in together. He thought she was gorgeous then, but there's something about her with black hair...that makes her so exotic and sultry.  They make quite a striking contrast with her pale, Caribbean blue eyes, making them so intense, that they almost glow.   

"I know.  I was red before I went black." She runs her fingers through her  long hair, briefly looking down at the strands before her eyes return to his gaze.

"Black is your color.  I mean...wow..." He tries not to stare too much, so he looks away.

"Haha. Thank you.  I'm glad you like it."

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"So what have you been up to?" Brooke asks as she  sways her hips to the music.

"Well, I graduated. I work for city hall now." 

"Nice! I graduated too but  I'm going back."

"Oh yeah?"

"I'll be attending med school next semester." 

"That's awesome! So you're not doing the school counseling?"

"No...I worked at a middle school for a year...it's not my thing.  I've always dreamed of being a doctor but I never pursued it."

"At least you got to see how you like it.  Good luck with med school though.  It kicked my brother's butt."

"Thanks.  How is he by the way?"

"He's good.  I haven't talked to him in a while.  He's been really busy since he became a doctor.  Do you still talk to Lyn?"

"No, we lost touch.  She was so busy with med school that I never saw her.  Then she disconnected her number so I haven't been able to get a hold of her."

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"You wouldn't happen to be Jessica's friend, would you? Please say yes." Landon approaches the blonde girl who occasionally stole looks in his direction.

"Haha yes.  And you're one of Nate's friends?" She mindlessly rubs the side of her neck with her hand.  He can't tell if she's annoyed or nervous.

"Yes.  I'm Landon." He offers his hand as he flashes her a smile.

"I'm Jamie.  Nice to meet you." 

"You wanna dance?" 

"Sure!"

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"So how do you know Jessica?" He asks as he tries not to stare at the way her breasts hold up her dress nicely.  

"She's my roommate.  How do you know Nate?" Jamie follows his eyes, secretly  catching him in the act.

"We've been best friends since high school." 

"Wow, you've known each other for a while."

"You can say that.  So what's going on with Nate and Jessica? I thought they broke up."

"Honestly, I don't even know.  They've been going back and forth for a year."

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"Hey, you wanna dance?" A dark-haired girl wearing sunglasses approaches Jake.  She's been eyeing him for the last ten minutes.  Even though she saw him come in with three other guys, she wanted to see if he's the type that approaches a girl first or if he waits until they come to him.  Seeing that her friends already found somebody to pair up with, she saw this as the perfect opportunity to talk to him.

"Uhh...yeah, sure." He's caught off guard by her directness.  He's a little shy around women, especially the hot brunettes.  There's something about women with dark hair that just call out to him, making him want to run his fingers through each silky strand.

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"So what's your name?" Her eyes seductively pull him in as she inches closer, hypnotizing him with the fluid movement of her body.

"Jake.  What's yours?" Now he's painfully aware of how short her dress is.  If she bends over in front of him, he will be able to see the goods.  And based on her body language, she may or may not be wearing panties.

"Naveah."

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"Do you want anything to drink?" Nate asks Jessica once  they reach the second floor.  It's the perfect spot for those who want a little more privacy, with less noise.  There's a separate seating area for those that just want to hang out and watch t.v.  There are also two hot tubs available for groups or couples, both closed in for extra privacy.

"Sure." 

"Melted Snowman, right?" 

"Yes.  You still remember." 

"Of course I do."

"Make me come alive
Come on, turn me on
Touch me, save my life
Come on and turn me on
I'm too young to die
Come on and turn me on"


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"Mmm...I love this drink." She lets out a soft moan as the sweet concoction runs down her throat.

"I know.  It's your favorite." The nectar lingers in Nate's mouth, but the alcohol slowly travels south of his body.  It burns his chest, leaving a trail of hot tingles towards his pants.  

"Nate..."

"Yeah?"

"You know how we get when we drink..."

"How do we get?"

"You know..." She leans closer, her lips grazing his ear as she whispers. "Hot..."

"Oh, shit..." Shivers run down his spine as her warm breath hampers his ability to breathe...or think straight.


*Copyright 2012 Lyn C.S.* -------------------------------------------------------

Author's Note: Ch. 27 (Fade Into You) from "Memoirs Of A City Girl" covers Luke and Lyn's trip to the lake.

"Turn Me On" by David Guetta (Featuring Nikki Minaj)

Video by: davidguettavevo

34 comments:

  1. OH YOU FUCKING BITCH! Ok, alright! Ok! You wait until I get some sleep YOU ARE IN BIG FUCKING TROUBLE!

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    1. *Looks around*

      Who me???

      Are you talking to ME??

      *Whistles* What ever could you mean?? xD

      *Sleeps with one eye open*

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  2. Oh my.... The sister is up to her tricks again did she not learn her lesson if Luke finds out the Shit is going to hit the fan

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    1. The thing is, they don't know each other since they never met. Naveah doesn't know that Brad is friends with the Rossi boys, nor do they know that she's Lyn's sister. For all she knows, Jake is another cute guy she met at a club, and she's very interested. That's her thing. She goes after what she wants.

      But you're right, if Luke finds out who she really is, it's on. I just hope Jake hasn't touched her by the time he finds out.

      Thanks for reading, Lckygrl!

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  3. hmmmm i'm wondering if Nate and Jessica will get back together again, for the umteenth time?

    I hope poor Jake gets laid hehe.

    Looking forwards to more! edenz~

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    1. Haha well, there's definitely still something there between Nate and Jessica. Even though though they broke it off, they are still drawn to each other. Nate is conflicted with pleasing his mom vs. pleasing himself, so he has blown hot and cold with his ex. He loves that he has this intense sexual chemistry with her, but he also wants to see what's out there.

      I hope Jake gets laid too, just not by Naveah. If he finds out that she's Lyn's sister after sleeping with her, he's probably going to curl up in a fetal position like The Crying Game. lol

      Thanks for reading, Edenz!

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  4. Oh wow what amazing chapter of Heat. I don't know what to think about chapter 5 but it was very good and I liked it alot. Oh my gosh Naveah is in heat now too?? what in the world is that girl upto? first of all in Memoirs she was Lyns sister and had sex with Brad and now she shows interest in Landon. hmm I have a feeling this Heat story of yours is going to get a whole lot more interesting as time goes on. Keep up the good work Wild Thang <3

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    1. Thanks Tom, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Yes, Naveah is in Heat now. I don't know how long, but she's friends with Nate's ex, so this won't be the last time you'll see her. Haha well, Naveah is just being Naveah. She goes after what she wants. She doesn't even know who the Rossi boys are. She saw Jake and thought he was cute.

      Yes, things will be picking up in the next few chapters. I'll give you a hint: one of the boys will get some. lol There's a reason why this story is called Heat. xD Thanks again for reading, Tom, and for the encouragement. Hope you're having a great weekend! It's cold here right now. Finally!

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  5. ~ Edenz,how could you wish him to 'Get Laid' with that skank!?
    ~ She is on the prowl,I knew bedding Brad was just anouther notch on her belt,no matter whom she hurts in the process!
    ~ Poor Nate can not get Jessica out of his system,& he is fighting what he wants,versus, what his mum wants for him,this is a no win situation!!!!!
    ~ He has to define his feelings for her!
    ~ Jake RUN!!!!!!
    ~ Loved it!(",)

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    1. LOL Karima!! Maybe she doesn't know about Naveah's history, so I don't blame her for saying that. You're right, she's on a prowl. She wanted Brad from the beginning, and she got him in the end. Of course, he was just as slutty as she was, hence the cheating. Twice. But like you said, she has no regard for other people's feelings. She wants what she wants, and dammit she's gonna get it.

      I know, Nate has been wrestling with himself, trying to please mom but satisfying his desires as well. He started out having fun with her, but things became a little more complicated. Then sex got involved...and it became harder to stay away. I hope Nate figures out his feelings too before someone really gets hurt...or pregnant. lol

      Haha yeah, Jake definitely needs to run!! If he knew what he was running from.

      Thanks for reading, Karima! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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  6. NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!! Keep that skanky bitch away from Jake! He deserves a nice girl not that backstabbing whore!

    NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

    I can't even think about the rest of this chapter. Why would you do that to Jake. I just bet you'd do something like have him fall for her then find out that she's Lyn's sister and then there will be a huge issue and brothers will fall out and it will just be bad!

    No she can't be with him. She doesn't deserve him! This is a bad situation and she needs to go away.

    I'm not happy :(

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    1. Wow, Jaz, I had no idea you would get so worked up over Naveah in this chapter! She's friends with Emily, and Emily is roommates with Brooke and Jamie, that's why she's in this chapter. If it makes you feel better, they're just dancing in this chapter. That doesn't necessarily have to lead to anything...unless Jake wants it to, since Naveah is a sure thing if she's into somebody.

      LOl wow, Jake falling for her, then finding out who she really is and causing a fall-out between the brothers?? I hate to admit it...but that does sound interesting. Ooooh, I can just see the drama in this peaceful, seemingly perfect family! lol Well, if I even go that route, the means I had good reason. So we'll see what happens.

      I agree, Jake needs to be with someone who deserves him, someone sweet. But it's not up to us, it's up to Jake. What if he's drawn to girls like Naveah because he's never been with someone like her?? Or maybe he can be the guy that can change her skanky ways? You never know.

      Awww, sorry Jaz. :-( *HUGS* They're just dancing!

      Thanks for reading!

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  7. ~ I am so with Jaz on this!!!!!!!(",)

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    1. Awwww, I didn't mean to get your upset because of Naveah. I was just listening to the voices in the story. lol xD

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  8. O_o lyns sis, with lukes brother. I forsee a lot of trouble. Thank God luke is not there at the moment. WoWsa great story again, but this one i can't forsee what might happen. Possible brothers against brothers, or Brad seeing the stuff, or omg i just can't forsee this one. Can't wait for next this one has me wondering what in hadies!

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    1. You're right, its good that Luke isn't there. But he doesn't know who she is though, he never met her. He only "knows of" Lyn's sister. I agree, if Jake gets involved with Naveah and falls for her, then finding out who she is, it can get ugly. Possibible divided loyalties: family vs. the women they love.

      And not to mention Brad and Lyn's reaction when they find out. lol Oh, the drama! But remember, they're just dancing in this chapter, and it may only go as far as that.

      Thanks for reading, Jerry!

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  9. Whaaaaa???? Naveah is such a hobag! And Lyn is way prettier than she is. It better JUST be dancing, because Jake deserves much better. Ugh. She's so nasty.

    I have been reading your updates, just have too busy with school to really comment. Glad I finally got all caught up!

    -Ali

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    1. LOL hobag!! I knew Naveah was unpopular but I underestimated how much she is loathed. Awww, that's very sweet that you think Lyn is prettier, but she doesn't think so. She thinks she's average compared to her sister because she's thinner, lighter and inherited her father's gray-green eyes. And it didn't help that her mom always gave her a hard time about her weight.

      I agree, Jake deserves much better. Hopefully he'll take his time to get to know her and not allow her to seduce him too soon.

      Thanks for still reading my stories despite your busy schedule. How's school? YAY, you're all caught up! :-)

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  10. So, both Luke and Jake like brunettes, eh? Jake, baby, if you like dark hair... it's totally cool. I'm a brunette :D

    Though Luke (and apparently Nate) have no trouble going after what they like, it's so adorable that little Jakey is shy around the pretty ladies. But... oh man. Watch out, Jake! Naveah is a maneater :( (Also, we clearly saw what a bitch she can be when she betrayed her sister with Brad, but how telling is it that Lyn is off having an emotional meltdown in another city and Naveah is just out clubbing and hitting on guys? Just an all around terrible person, that one!)

    Aww, I love too that Nate and Jake live together. And they have loyal best friends. And terrible taste in women, lol. So precious they go out clubbing together. Just hope they don't end up brokenhearted!!

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    1. Haha yes, Luke and Jake love them some brunettes. I don't know, maybe because their mom is blonde, they want something different. lol Look at your already trying to tempt Jake! Actually, you better snag him before Naveah takes her into her lair and have her way with him. xD

      I think it's because Jake is the biggest momma's boy that he's shy around women. When he was a kid, he was more outgoing, but it seems like he played it safe as he got older. Awww, little Jakey! That's so cute! You're right, Naveah is a maneater. And she wants her some Jake with gravy on top. I think if Jake knew who she was and what she did, he probably would have ran the other way. And now that you mention Lyn dealing with her pain while Naveah is out clubbing, she doesn't even appear remorseful for what she did.

      Haha so you think they have terrible taste in women? Well, Nate can't let go of his sexual chemistry with Jessica yet and Jake is a sucker for brunettes, so I guess they have a lot to learn. lol

      Thanks for reading, Count!

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  11. Loved the update, I like how you added Brooke from the Real World, that was a nice touch. But I hope that Luke's poor brother gets away from Naveah before anything bad happens. Actually, if you see a meteor coming straight for Naveah in Bridgeport, don't move her out of the way

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    1. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! Since I cancelled Real World, I will be slowly bringing in a few characters from that story into Heat. Right now, they're just dancing, so there's no harm. As long as Jake doesn't get drunk, he should be okay.

      Haha a meteor accident, huh? Wow, that would be an interesting way for her to go. It's funny because I've never had a meteor crash in my game. Ever. And I've never seen a unicorn either. lol

      Thanks for reading, Kristine!

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  12. Err... If Luke's momma didn't like Jessica.. then she'll LOATHE Naveah. I have to agree with kmsim15, don't move her out of the way of nasty things falling from the sky hehe.

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    1. LOL I agree, all hell with break loose if Sarah finds out that Naveah is Lyn's sister. I can just see it now. She'll probably put a restraining order on that girl. xD

      Death by meteor, huh? lol Hmmmm...interesting...I'll add that to my "how to kill sims without conscience" list.

      Thanks for reading, Mypal!

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  13. Hey, I love characters and screenshots.
    Are you going to write something new?? Anyway, let me know, plz!

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    1. Hi Stoneflower, thanks for checking out my story and I'm so glad you are enjoying it so far! Ch. 27 for "Memoirs" will be ready on Monday, and Ch. 6 for "Heat" will be ready on Thursday. :-)

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  14. TIME THE HELL OUT! This slut is NOT about to work her poison through Luke's family! PLEASE say it isn't so!! NO NO NO NOT JAKE! Why in the hell is Lyn's "friend" even hanging with her? Sorry I'm seeing red! That slore is going to screw his head all up and then when she sees Luke...

    I hope Sarah finds out and guts her before her son falls for her!

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    1. LOL Qui!! Well, she doesn't know Luke or his family, so technically, she's not doing anything malicious...yet. She's just dancing with Jake and being her flirty self. She's friends with Jessica and she knows Brooke since they grew up in the same neighborhood. And since Brooke and Jamie are roommates with Jessica, they all decided to hang out.

      Naveah does have the potential to screw Jake up if he gets involved with her. If. I do see the potential disaster in this situation. But right now, tney're just dancing. xD

      Thanks for reading, Qui!

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    2. She could have buying a burger from the same fast food spot as him and I would have flipped. This chick knows no bounds and if they talk and she here what he does, little green dollar signs will shoot from her eyes and then BAM! She's probably go after Joe too once she has Jake around her finger.

      Sorry, the mother in me is seeping out. You know we have radar for whores. LOL

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    3. LOL Qui!! Damn, buying a burger from the same fast food joint as him?? You're like mother bird, you're on full skank alert! xD I don't blame you though, when Naveah wants, she gets. You're right, he hasn't even told her what he does yet. She'll probably jump in right in the middle of the dance floor. lol

      OMG, Joe too?? That would be some serious scandal. Sarah will have to kill her...after she cuts Joe's balls off and feeds them to the fishes. Well, Joe is a happily married man, so he should be to ward off her evil ways. Unless he's having problems with Sarah...then he can catch himself in a weak moment. I'm more concerned about Jake though. Since he's relatively inexperienced with women, she might sucker him right into her love lair.

      Bahaha whore radar!! You crack me up!! I don't blame you though. I don't think any mother wants a Naveah near their son.

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  15. Please tell me that the next chapter contains a horrible clubbing accident where a giant discoball falls onto some stupid whore in shades...

    OK - focus, Jilly!

    Nate and Jessica, that's a pretty interesting set up! I have to wonder if his mom's disapproval is both catnip and kitty litter for him. Maybe he's drawn to Jess because mommy doesn't like her, the "bad girl/forbidden fruit" thing, and at the same time is turned off by her for the same reason.

    This should be fun to watch!

    I don't know if I've mentioned how much I love the updates at the begining of each chapter, but it really helps bring everything right back to the front of your mind. Plus, we get to relive stuff like this:

    -After the boys left, Joseph warned his wife that he was going to "spank that ass".

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    1. LOL Jilly, you crack me up!! A giant discoball falling on some stupid whore in shades?? Man, seriously, this girl has some enemies. Another reader wanted a giant meteor to fall on her. xD

      You make an interesting point about Nate and Jessica. I really like your catnip/kitty litter description of her. He may very well be drawn to her because she's forbidden, and that makes the sex even more exciting. At the same time, he wants to make mom proud, so when the heat of the moment wears off, he's reminded that she's not good enough. Hence the on again/off again relationship.

      Awww I'm glad you find the chapter summaries helpful at the beginning of each chapter! I remember you told me that once, and it really put a smile to my face, but I don't mind hearing it again. It's really the best way for me to get into writing mode, and to remember where the characters left off in the story. It brings everything fresh in my mind as well! Haha "spank that ass". You made me giggle reading that.

      Thanks for reading!

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  16. What!!!

    I don't know about Jake and Jessica. The only thing that seems to draw them together is sex!

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    1. LOL yup, Naveah's on the prowl. Though in her defense, she doesn't know who Jake is or his family. He's just another cute guy that she wants to hook up with.

      Sex is clearly a major factor in Nate and Jessica's relationship, but I think there may be something more than meets the eye. Nate hasn't been able to get her out of his system each time they break up.

      Thanks for reading, Daisies!

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