tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post8460174654500010297..comments2023-06-28T08:29:05.513-04:00Comments on Heat: Chapter Twenty (Final Chapter)tommiegirl_cahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-1986453963592821082013-09-15T17:01:18.706-04:002013-09-15T17:01:18.706-04:00I agree, Luke and his family have been through a l...I agree, Luke and his family have been through a lot. When it came to Lyn, they both reacted emotionally to each other and that stemmed from lifetimes of frustration, not just in this one. It needed to happen. Otherwise, they would have repeated the same patterns. But like you said, Luke tried to force change when it just wasn't the right time yet.<br /><br />I'm glad you enjoyed this tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-5315431377931285742013-09-11T08:21:45.637-04:002013-09-11T08:21:45.637-04:00That family has so much to deal with. I do hope L...That family has so much to deal with. I do hope Luke is able to uncover the mystery of his father's death and the arson. I think that he set himself up to fail with Lyn. He reacted like a guy, I guess that's ok, but, yeah. He saw something that he wanted to change and tried to force the change. At the end though, he truly seemed to have chosen to forget Lyn. Too bad for him and for Zhippidyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12570869365967598793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-11076454620981747332013-09-10T19:30:24.429-04:002013-09-10T19:30:24.429-04:00It looks like Luke will have to settle for next be...It looks like Luke will have to settle for next best thing after Lyn. Like you said, he'll cherish and respect that person but there will always be a part of him that belongs to Lyn. They are each other's half. Sadly, it doesn't look like it's meant to be in this life.<br /><br />Just like your story vision, Luke has had to let her go. He could have reached out to her after that tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-85376232453637026802013-09-10T19:18:53.246-04:002013-09-10T19:18:53.246-04:00I really didn't want to have to end this story...I really didn't want to have to end this story so early, but I also knew that I'd probably leave it unfinished, which is worse. And I would not want to leave you guys hanging. So yeah, I figured the right thing to do would be to end it now. I can always come back to it later.<br /><br />Sarah has also been through a lot, and she sees a lot of herself in Lyn and what she's gone throughtommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-33529054109290145562013-09-10T19:09:43.847-04:002013-09-10T19:09:43.847-04:00I know, it doesn't feel like the end, does it?...I know, it doesn't feel like the end, does it? There is still a lot left unresolved. But I'd rather end it now than take a long break and leave you guys hanging or give up on the story altogether. I can always come back to when I find more time. <br /><br />Sarah tried to drill some sense into Luke but in the end, he chose to do anything about it. It's sad that he had to let Lyn go tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-50218136117968452802013-09-10T19:01:32.759-04:002013-09-10T19:01:32.759-04:00When I start writing again, I'll be sure to co...When I start writing again, I'll be sure to continue with this story to tie up some loose ends. I agree, there is still a lot that could have been addressed. Maybe in the future I'll combine both stories and just do a sequel. We'll see.<br /><br />Thank you so much for the kind words, Tom. I promise I won't stop writing. Just taking a break. I will be sure to let you know when I&#tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-64767586861436946632013-09-10T18:55:25.791-04:002013-09-10T18:55:25.791-04:00I agree, there is still a lot to the story that co...I agree, there is still a lot to the story that could have been covered, unfortunately I'm swapped for time with work and classes. If I ever pick up the story again, it will be to tie up the loose ends. But right now I can't say when that will be. So I figured I'd at least end the story with some closure for Luke.<br /><br />It was good for the whole family to be together, that's tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-42201523723653281362013-09-10T18:45:08.388-04:002013-09-10T18:45:08.388-04:00Sarah gave Luke some great advice and it helped br...Sarah gave Luke some great advice and it helped bring them closer. Unfortunately, Luke didn't do anything about it. He chose to let Lyn go instead. It was sad but it was the right thing to do. He freed himself and Lyn from this endless loop.<br /><br />Luke definitely needs to be careful in how he handles the investigation. He really doesn't know what he's dealing with and the tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-80227587019455196782013-09-10T18:38:32.000-04:002013-09-10T18:38:32.000-04:00Thanks Lckygrl, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)Thanks Lckygrl, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04541107908741237375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-16851861814311460392013-09-09T10:08:12.680-04:002013-09-09T10:08:12.680-04:00Will he love anyone as much as he loves her, no, n...Will he love anyone as much as he loves her, no, never! He'll cherish and respect that person more than love. He came back for her in another life... you don't just tear that apart easily, if it all!<br /><br />I'm sad this story ended, but not the way it did. These people have been miserable tied to this reincarnation loop. They are all better off just letting go, or at least Luke isJean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-84639640090760686832013-09-08T22:55:15.585-04:002013-09-08T22:55:15.585-04:00Like everyone else, I'm shocked that this is t...Like everyone else, I'm shocked that this is the end. But I understand, life has a way of interfering, huh?<br /><br />I'm glad he confided in Sarah, and I'm very impressed with her insight. She's a very strong woman.<br /><br />Just like Lyn, I feel like Luke is giving up. This makes me sad to see.<br /><br />I hope we do get to see more in the future when you can manage it. NernersHumanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13159261422405512570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-29040134701476557782013-09-08T06:13:06.100-04:002013-09-08T06:13:06.100-04:00I can't believe this the end!:( There is so mu...I can't believe this the end!:( There is so much more to be told, the boys have to find Joseph's killer and then there's Nate and Hannah and the twist in their story. <br />This was another emotional chapter, I'm glad Luke and his mom got a chance to talk and I think it was good for her to give Luke some perspective on how Lyn is feeling and thinking. It's so sad that Joseph Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-27137747834585474802013-09-07T16:29:00.404-04:002013-09-07T16:29:00.404-04:00My Dearest Lyndsey,
Thanks for the heat update I r...My Dearest Lyndsey,<br />Thanks for the heat update I really enjoyed it. I can't belive thats going to be the end of that story I think there is alot more that can be told with this story and it deffinatly needs what you said you had planned originally in having 40 chapters. I hope you will write more. Your writing is a talent and you must keep heat going as well as memiors otherwise all you AtomicSimmernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-63982460584945005452013-09-07T10:45:34.818-04:002013-09-07T10:45:34.818-04:00What??? Whoa this can't be it? :( Sad day, ver...What??? Whoa this can't be it? :( Sad day, very sad day. I was prepared for Memoirs to end but not Heat. There's so much left unresolved. Joe's death left unsolved, and the situation with Nate and, and this can't be it Lyn it just can't. <br /><br />I just feel like there is still so much to this story. :(<br /><br />It was a very sad ending. Seeing the family together. I'jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-86885518315961310922013-09-07T07:44:01.647-04:002013-09-07T07:44:01.647-04:00Wow, I just don't know what to say... It's...Wow, I just don't know what to say... It's so sad this had to end, but I see it had to end this way. Luke seems so grown up now, that conversation with his mother has done him much good. Also, the way he said his goodbyes and thank-yous to his dad by his grave was very moving, just what he needed, imo.<br /><br />Only, why do I have a bad feeling about him continuing his father's Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6115923977357679085.post-29044706536893052962013-09-07T07:19:25.294-04:002013-09-07T07:19:25.294-04:00Congrats on ending this and this was an eye openin...Congrats on ending this and this was an eye opening between mother and son.<br /><br />Loved it :)Lckygrl1975https://www.blogger.com/profile/00651487110014309878noreply@blogger.com